I'm Lost.

This is a song I wrote for a band.

 I’m Lost.

 

Heeeelp!!

My heart is screaming from the pain there’s inside

Don’t make it worse, you’re already tearing me apart

Don’t try to stop me from leaving this world

My voice will never be heard (Never be heard.)

 

 

I’m left behind

I’m the whisper in the dark

I gotta pay the price

I’m lost beyond my own sight,

And I can’t seem to find the goddamn light!!!
(can’t find light)

 

 

Red liquid run down my arm

Desire is taking over

I don’t care anymore

Death is close

F**K YOU ALL!!!!
(F**k you all)

 

 

I’m left behind

I’m the whisper in the dark

I gotta pay the price

I’m lost beyond my own sight,

And I can’t seem to find the goddamn light!!!
(can’t find light)

 

 

Don’t try to save me it’s too late

I’m knocked down

There’s nothing left for me here

I wake up haunted

Hearing voices in my head.

 

 

I’m lost beyond my own sight

I can’t seem to find light.*2

 

I’m lost beyond my own f*****g sight!!!

 

Author's Note

Ignore Grammar Problems.
Honest Opinion As Always.
This is a song for a band, where one of my friends play drums, he asked them to use this so they did! :D

Reviews

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

Rebellious lyrics and ultra-modern.
Nice i hope u find a nice tune for it!

[sarah]

This is a really powerful write!

[Maimai]

like it :) Keep writing

[Coyote Poetry]

A direct and powerful poem. Must be a hard rock type song. Ain't no hope in the words. Just the accepting of pain and one way to escape. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[frozensakura]

like it like usually (: i enjoy reading your writings (:

[Calypso]

Full of emotions and almost gut wrenching

[Hello, Goodbye]

curiously interesting expression here.. unique to you but very much entertaining..

[Thea]

You really used the most appropriate words for the meaning of the song. I wish I can hear someone sing it...Great writing... :D

[Becky C Strukamp]

I was just thinking as I read this that put to a song would would be awesome. Your chosen words are perfect...very good poem/song!! Well penned!!!