Now It's All Over.

Yeah, My feelings won't have another show.

I guess I cared too much

I saw myself shot

I tore my heart open 

My feelings had its show

Now it's all over

They're hidden in a box.

Author's Note

Ignore Grammar Problems.
Honest Opinion As Always.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A honest and direct poem. Sometime good to hide the heart in a box for a short time. Need time to heal. Thank you for a excellent poem.
Coyote

[Gilbert Saint]

too short, for me. feelings are usually expressed better in many textures of vocabulary, anger, surprise,etc all these can be combined to form something great.

[Maimai]

Hiding you feelings is sometimes good, depending on the situation, I normally hide all my feels. Keep writing x

[Calypso]

Hiding yourself isn't always the best answer.

[knightcall]

we do hide our feelings in a box. my job is to get them out and let people healm faster. interesting setup to a powerful ending that you slam the poem shut with....

[ivizarx]

feeling that tough touch with the shell of a relationship now gone hermit crab is the meaning of it all. least that's my perspective. enjoyed it, short but to the point and meaningful. that's powerful. thnx 4 the RR, it's definitely a hit with me.

[Cherrie Palmer]

Your analogies stand in contract but I do like this piece and the emotions they reveal

[Homeschool]

"I saw myself shot" was a great line, for often the pain in our lives is so deep that we feel separated, out of body. The self-abuse in the next line was beautiful. At first I found the poem too short, but I understand the effect, and I tend to ramble too much in my writing from time to time. Sometimes in the battlefield of art it's better to be a sniper than a machine-gun-wielding foot soldier, spraying bullets everywhere rather than hitting with one fell swoop of precision.
Great job! Bravo.

[Becky C Strukamp]

Nice Poem! Sometimes our feelings are hidden away. Good writing!