Pen And Paper.

I’ll fight you off with my pen and paper

 Let my emotions fly and never come back

  With Pen and Paper I will defeat you

   My life were flashing before my eyes

    With the gentle touch of angels lips,

     Everything seem to be bearable

      But now that you sunk deep down to nowhere

       I tear my heart open to show you my bloody scars

        This is all for you

         Because my scars tell me the past is real.

 

Author's Note

Ignore Grammar Problems.
Honest Opinion As Always.

Reviews

[Homeschool]

I like your style, and I love the old premise of the "pen being mightier than the sword."
"Sunk deep down to nowhere" was my favorite line. It seemed like the narrator had allowed the love of their life into a deep place, into a profoundly trusting relationship, but this gift was returned with pain and indifference.
I loved the vulnerability in this piece. Good ending too. Bravo.

[Gilbert Saint]

concise and to the point, i ike that.

[Becky C Strukamp]

Excellent...love this poem...

I'll fight you off with pen and paper (excellent most excellent) take back the power ...beautifully written!!!