Farewell.

I hate this...

I can't take all of our fights...

It's killing me slowly...

I don't want to lose you...

But I know you deserve better than me...

I won't stand in your way...

I'm so sorry...

I never meant to tore us apart...

I'm left alone...

I miss you so...

But if you want to leave...

Then do it...

And again... I won't stand in your way...

Farewell..

Written By: A Fallen Heroine.

Date: 20th Of June 2011.

Dedication: My Savior..

Author's Note

Ignore grammar problems.
Honest Opinion.

Reviews

[knightcall]

oh doomed romance. always ripe for poetry

[Calypso]

The worst is the good-bye.

[Becky C Strukamp]

The reader feels your pain. Very use of descriptive words. Excellent once more. KEEP UP THE GOOD WRITING.IT HEALS THE SOUL. There is inner turmoil here ...she wants to turn someone loose to save them but she is really saving herself and doesnt know it. She is the good person her not the bad!!

[solitar]

you make me cryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy

[Sukriti Suki]

yes...very good expression.

[sarah]

I have felt this way this is a really great and sad poem! great great work!

[CharlesMonroe]

This is so sad, but I love it. I know the feeling. Amazing as always dear (:

[Maimai]

I love this, I know how this feels, me and a friend are always fighting. Keep writing

[Coyote Poetry]

Sometime things don't fall right. I said if often. Love need timing and good luck. Need two people on the same road wanting the same things. I have more sad stories then I want to remember. You are smart and would be a diamond to any lucky person who know you as a friend. Goodbye and separations are never easy. A excellent poem.
Coyote