I am Only One

I close my eyes

Feel a relive as I slice my veins open

Red liquid run down my arm

The only thing that keep me from suicide is you

I know that if I did, then you'd too

Dark Shadows brings me back to you

Back to you and you loving hands

But as I close my eyes

I feel nothing

Your hands are gone

Your lips as well

Your scent, gone as the wind

The gentle touch of your lips burn me

When I open my eyes

Everything's gone

I'm sitting in my bed

"It was just a dream."

I sigh and tries to cover it up

Nobody knows how hurt I am

"Do you hear it? I'm screaming it"

I'm so sick of my life.

Author's Note

Ignore Grammar Problems.
Honest Opinion As Always.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A amazing poem. I could feel the pain and hurt in your words. I like the feel and desire of this poem. Remind me of Edgar Allan Poe's poem. Dripping with pain and misery and just a dream. A outstanding poem.
Coyote

[sarah]

This is very sad and bloody but it's very powerful and full of strong emotions great poem!

[CharlesMonroe]

I love this, it's sad, but still beautiful. But it breaks my heart, becasue I don't want anything to happen to you :/

[Calypso]

Gritty and sickening. Not that your writing is gritty and sickening (because your writing is good), its the story.

[Becky C Strukamp]

the dreams of lost loves can be haunting..so much emotion in your poems...you show the reader the torment and anguish. Writing can be a drug too and a healing process..

Good work!!

[knightcall]

your scent gone as the wind. you miss the touch, the kiss and its left you with hurt.

[Sleeping Maiden]

Such an emotional and dark piece. I really like it though. =) i can feel the pain as i read then the frustration and anger. I can relate to your poem. Life can be cruel and has its own way of challenging us. Sometimes the pain is too much that it drives one to the edge. But great write! I liked your poem.

[Maimai]

love it :)

[M.Babu]

What a hauntingly dark piece you've woven here.
Deep.

~M.Babu~