What The F**k!?

Yeah, I am finally mad, nothing to fear, I'll vent it here. I won't let it hurt anyone.

It feels like everyone I care about rips me apart.

What the f**k is going on?!

What the hell have I done to you!?

Why do you have to rip my scars open!?

Is it because you want to face them?!

Don't touch me.

My cold tone might burn you,

burn you in an icy way.

Stay the f**k away from me.

Author's Note

Ignore Grammar Problems.
Honest Opinion As Always~

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Strong and honest words young lady. Sometime need to be direct and hope you are left alone. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Kyle]

Very intense! Very powerful too.

[CharlesMonroe]

Alot of anger, and I knwo this feeling all to well. Amazing (:

[TM "Ree" Tate]

I feel anger resulting from hurt in this piece, and I think everybody can relate to those feelings. Nicely expressed> Enjoyed reading this..I FELT this

[Calypso]

Agree

[M.Babu]

The rage and resentment is so ripe in your tone! Keep at it.

~M.Babu~

[Sleeping Maiden]

Definately very powerful. I love it. You expressed anger very well in this. Great write!

[Maimai]

I love this, know how it feels... I can relate to this so much, keep writing.

[Enigma]

Something everyone feels in their lives. People seem to have a some sinister pleasure in digging our wounds deep and scarring us further. All we want is to be left alone during such times. Well written.

[Jvl narasimharao]

Your feelings are more important than your grammar.You are really budding genius.Wonderful poem for your age