Written In Blood.

”Move on girl, move on.”

You may be right

But I need your help

He was all I ever needed

And now, I’m so devastated.

Devastated and suicidal

No good kombi…

“You’re so strong, you can do it!”

Please don’t be so sure about that

You’ll get disappointed if not…

Don’t expect too much.

This poem is written in blood.

Author's Note

Ignore grammar problems.
Honest Opinion As Always~

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Poems written in blood should concern you. I like this short poem. Just honest words with a powerful ending. Thank you for a excellent poem.
Coyote

[Enigma]

Intense and overwhelming emotions well captured. :)

[CharlesMonroe]

I agree with Namlezz. (:

[Calypso]

Another gritty poem

[Becky C Strukamp]

I get it!! Powerful!!! Good insight!

[frozensakura]

i love it... very powerful. i can relate.

[Namelezz]

Amazing piece, as always you blow me away.
Such poweful speech.
You ARE strong.
Don't doubt it or I'll tell you again.
Love you

~Namelezz~

[Maimai]

can relate :( love it!