Would You?

Would you listen to me if I wanted to tell you something?

Without Jared being there?

Because… I really want to tell you something

But…

I’m afraid that Jared will take the f**k over…

I want to speak to PALLE for once…

I’m not trying to make you to feel bad about this…

But…

I’m devastated and I miss you…

Do you want me to give up on you?

Do you want me to leave our memories behind?

I’m not trying to make you take me back

Because, I know you won’t, you can’t

The time we had was precious to me, it’ll always be

But…

Again…

We have to move our a*s

I never meant to hurt you

I never meant to break your crumbling sanity.

 

I don’t know how you feel anymore, but I’ll always be there to help you if you like.

Author's Note

Ignore Grammar Problems.
Honest Opinion~

Reviews

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

This was a great poem. I have felt this as well...and this is excellent writing. Thanks for sharing.

[Calypso]

Great poem

[Coyote Poetry]

Offer of kindness and friendship are the real gifts in a life. I like the desire in your words. Thank you for a excellent poem.
Coyote

[sarah]

Man I have felt this before it's tough great write!

[Jessie McRiley]

I know what you're dealing with...
I love your writing, but this didn't work for me..
It didn't make me feel your pain... It come off kinda' shallow.. which I know you're not.
You are a good writer, but every writer has bad piece.. sorry

But i still love your work though..

[CharlesMonroe]

I feel bad reviewing this, because it feels like a private conversation between you two, or three I should say. Either way, it's sad, and it's good, and I will listen to, if you ever shall need me to ^_^

[solitar]

I WILL LISTEN TO YOU ALL THE TIME