I'll Die Trying.

I Sure Will Die Trying.

I think it's my time to leave now

I've done more harm than good.

If it takes forever, then I'll die trying

It feels like the whole world is crazy

Nothing seems to be real, not anymore.

You knew I wanted to hold you

But we fell,

We fell so hard

We watched our world crash.

I haven't quit crying

I won't be able to for a while

I can't seem to find my way back home

My soul won't fly free

But I'll die trying.

I'm definitely not strong enough to get through this

Your claws have dug deeper than I thought was possible.

You left my heart bleeding

Ripped it open

Blood run down my corpse

"You'll Be Fine Heroine. I promise."

You can't promise me that.

I'm the only one who can.

Damn I don't feel like trying.

Not anymore.

But...

I'll Die Trying.

"You Can Get Through Anything, You're Strong!"

No way.

I still feel him in me.

I can still taste his lips.

Feel his hands on me.

Don't lie to me.

I won't get over him.

I never will.

He dug too deep.

Too deep to break out.

You taught me how to fly

Then why am I still here?

Why am I still standing on the ground?

I cover my arm

Trying to put up my front

Cover it up.

It doesn't seem to be working.

"You're not alone Heroine."
I'm alone in this

No one can help me

I have to be struggling

I have to fight against the absence of you

The tides are getting higher

I can’t keep my head above the waves

They’re smashing me down

I’m drowning in the cold water of nothing.

Everything seem to drag me down now, I can’t stand up.

I broke my legs

You stitched my heart

Yet you tore them open..

I won't come back home

But...

If it takes forever

I'll Die Trying.

Author's Note

Ignore Grammar Problems.
Honest Opinion.

Reviews

[Calypso]

Great poem. This has a lot of meaning to it and more then you think it would.

[Coyote Poetry]

Pain and pleasure can be felt in the same moment. I like the emotion and the desire of this poem. Even with great pain we try to hold on to something.
"You'll Be Fine Heroine. I promise."

'You can't promise me that.
I'm the only one who can.
Damn I don't feel like trying.
Not anymore.'
No weakness in the poem. Just hard and direct words and emotion. Thank you for a excellent poem.
Coyote

[FaithfullyJennyBear]

Really long poem, But i agree with all of the reviews below, it's strong, powerful and meaningful x

[sarah]

This is such a strong poem! I really feel like I can relate to this piece, a really great poem

[CharlesMonroe]

I agree with TJ. I know what your going through is hard, and I know you get sick of hearing the same things over and over. And I know you don't believe it right now, but you will. I doubt I could help you. But if you ever feel alone, if you ever feel you need to talk or vent. Message me (:

[TJ]

such a sad and heartbreaking piece of love lost. If you'll die trying then die trying to free yourself bc thats the only thing worth dying for

[FallenHeroXx]

This was good. Almost made me feel that pinch of regret. Even though Palle was madly in love with you, he couldn't handle it. Trust me, i know. But anyway this was good. Keep on trying. Even though palle is dying.

Best regards from your new ex boyfriend.

Jared Nyox Bastion Miller

[Namelezz]

Love it darling.
Amazing work as usually.
You never let me down as a reader.
Keep it up!

~Namelezz~