Broken Love.

I fell so hard..

It's hard to see that you've moved on...

You left a whole lifetime behind...

Yet I'm still stuck, I still feel your lips pressed softly against mine...

It's true when I say I cannot live without you...

I'm surrounded by the darkest shadows...

I need your dazzling light...

I'm addicted to you...

I still love you..

Author's Note

Ignore Grammar Problems.
Honest Opinion As Always..

Reviews

[Dahlia Phoenix]

Its sad in a remarkable way. I can't explain it but it feels almost as if the darkness was the owner of love from all the poems I have read.

[*skittlez*]

i feel the same way 0n this 0em it is s0 amazing i feel the same way ab0ut a b0y but he d0nt ever believe me

[sarah]

Very strong and sad and i know how this feels, great poem!

[Coyote Poetry]

A strong and powerful words. A broken heart need time and hope. I like the desire for love. Thank you for a excellent poem.
Coyote

[TJ]

how tragic and sad this is... i can feel the broken heart as if it was in my own chest

[FallenHeroXx]

Pathetic excuse for dissapointing me...

[TheFemininePad]

I can actually sense your sadness in your poem. You manage to convey your emotions through your writing, and do a good job of it. It sucks when you love someone, but that person has moved on. It feels so hard sometimes, and you feel lonely when love isn't returned. I know it is hard, but you must have the strength to move on.

[CharlesMonroe]

I love this, and I can feel the saddness in it, I'm sorry you're hurting. But from a poetic staandpoint, the format was great, and the poem itself is beautiful