Evil Angel.

Sleep tight My Evil Angel

I don't need you right now,

Go to rest.

Spread your wings and embrace me

Dark has surrounded us,

We're not seeking for an escape,

Not anymore.

We're comfortable around each other

We're no longer afraid,

When I look into your black eyes

My heart is filled with pure dark.

You help me survive

You keep my head held high

Spread your wings and let me in.

Author's Note

Ignore Grammar Problems.
Honest Opinion.

Reviews

[Dahlia Phoenix]

This is pretty unique in its own way. When you describe the evil angel, it doesn't seem evil because it protects the one who controls it. It brings this picture into one's mind like the random pictures of fallen angels. Captivating in such a way that it makes the reader wonder. Nice job!

[Demetri J]

You did a decent job, it's unique and thought provoking

[Leanne Conway]

I like this.

[Enigma]

A poem with well developed dark theme. It has that choking feel to it u know, as the "wings" close around you. Nicely penned. :)

[Tasha]

i liked the dark feel it had with the evil angel. good work.

[Coyote Poetry]

Sometime anger can be a friend. When hard times come. Good people dig deep and draw from wherever source they have. I done more good pissed off then when I'm content. I like how you described your desire and your emotion. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[TJ]

I agree the poem is very seductive but also hopeless and helpless as if you're accepting the darkness because you've seen there's no way to obtain light.
Good Work

[Libby McKeown]

It's definitely seductive, and I like the dimness. . .but it's missing something. Maybe delete random words to give a little more mystery? Just a small suggestion; it's pretty solid as it is.