You Broke Me.

A Fallen Hero... Please Take Me Back..

I'm dead inside..

I'm fading..

NOTHING lifts me up..

well, actually YOU could..

A Fallen Hero..

You're all I have..

Take a look at what had happened to me..

Ask my parents how I'm doing..

I'm falling into myself..

They can't get to me..

I won't let them...

"I'd hate to say, I was right"

Dad I know you'd hate to say it...

But you did..

I'm burned..

My grave is calling..

I can't resist..

Don't try to stop me..

Don't tell me to stay..

Hell I can't go on..

I WON'T..

We were meant to be..

Now..

You tells me all you need is time..

Yet time will destroy every little piece of us..

I can't talk about this..

I wish you'd take me back..

I wish you'd bring be back to life..

I can't believe you left..

Show me a garden there's bursting into life..

I LOVE YOU!!!!!!

Written By: A Fallen Heroine.

Date: 1st of June 2011.

Dedication: A Fallen Hero.

Author's Note

Ignore Grammar Problems.
Honest Opinion As Always~
Yeah, as you may have figured out... he broke up with me..

Reviews

[the in between]

There is straightforward anger and frustration. Hope all is well as of right now.

[M.Babu]

The anguish in your tone feels sincere and honest my friend...that's always what a good author should aim for...authenticity.

Hope you will pull through...writing is a perfect medium for this so keep at it!

~M.Babu~

[TJ]

i can feel the heartache and hopelessness in this one its so visceral that it's obvious it was written in such a moment of pain and depression.
Keep your head up

[CharlesMonroe]

I'm so sorry ): but don't get down. If he was stupid enough to break up with you then he can pay for it. Not you. It'll be okay (:

[Enigma]

Its essentially sad. Heart-breaks are always painful and difficult to deal with. The poem captures the after-thought of one. I hope you feel better.
A good write.. :)

[Libby McKeown]

I like the honesty of your emotion, and the clarity. As an expressive work, the poem tells ol dude exactly how you feel. As a poem, it may need a little more work. Weave some mystery in there. Make them work for it! Thanks for sharing your talent

[Coyote Poetry]

Kind and powerful words. Poetry can express what we need and want in a life. Thank you for a powerful and amazing poem.
Coyote