F**k It All.

F**k It And Leave It Breathless.

F**k you, 

f**k it all, 

f**k yourself.

F**k this world,

 f**k my existence, 

f**k it all.

Author's Note

Ignore Grammar Problems.
Honest Opinion As Always.

Reviews

[knightcall]

We have a new slogan.

[M.Babu]

Writing is the best release for this rage!
Keep venting!

~M.Babu~

[Enigma]

Powerful.

[TJ]

Very intense! Very gritty! Loved it

[Libby McKeown]

It's intense, and primal. It's the poetic equivalent of a caveman grunt.

[Coyote Poetry]

No room for error in this poem. Direct and the point is very clear. Anger can be a good thing. Use it to do something good for your self. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Corrupthoughts]

Very, very much reminds me of Slipknot's 'Surfacing' which goes like;
"F**k it all, f**k this world, f**k everything that you stand for."

For that reason, I would suggest branching out. Clearly there is unresolved emotion you can use to spew out verse after verse of angry rants and poetic rage. This piece alone, like in Slipknot's song, is good as a connecting piece or course, but as a stand alone I feel it lacks. I want to see more of WHY you feel this way. 'Tis all just my opinion of course :)

[CharlesMonroe]

I love this, very strong and powerful and intense. I can really relate to this. I can tell you're sick of the world. It deffinitlly shows thorugh this