The Absence Of You.

it's hard to deal with the pain of losing you

The absence of you still lingers here

What hurts the most was being so close to you..

The lose of you is getting worse

I wish I could hold you tight

Please don't let me go..

I guess I'm giving up

I wish Dark to take me down

Since you left, I haven't been able to resist..

I'm getting older, yet I won't be able to get over you

I can't believe it still hurt like a b***h..

Author's Note

Ignore grammar Problems.
Honest opinion as always~

Reviews

[Leanne Conway]

This shows emotion, it's straight forward and beautiful. I may be young, But I know that love is a painful thing sometimes. When you feel you've become so close with someone, then they leave and it hurts, But losing someone helps you become stronger and better understand so you know who to look for.
Thank you so much for this amazing poem you provided us with. Thank you for sharing your talent once more. (:

[Coyote Poetry]

A strong and direct poem. Love disappointment can hurt and leave us wishing for a better ending.. I like the honest words and desire to forget. Thank you for a excellent poem.
Coyote

[Chris Smith Welshpoetcs]

It hurts like hell, that feeling of being torn apart.

[TJ]

Very raw and exposed pain in this one, strong emotion

[Hello, Goodbye]

the pain is evident.. clearly spoken..

[Dahlia Phoenix]

The ending kind of made me snort out laughing because that's something you see at the end but other than that, this poem was dynamic! Loving someone who you were so attached to can be painful because that's the only person who in your eyes was worth living for. After reading, I may not want to let go of my boyfriend because I love him too much! Nice work either way.

[Namelezz]

I love the ending :) You made me stick to the screen while reading this. Great job :)

-Namelezz

[Enigma]

Tragic, yet beautiful. Flows very well from one line to the next. The last line stands out a bit. But no worries.

"The absence of you still lingers here
What hurts the most was being so close to you.." - My favourite lines.

Great job, in all. :)