Why?

Why?

A Poem by A Risen Heroine.
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"You're so sucky."
Wow...
How nice of you.
WHAT HAVE I EVER DONE TO YOU!
Why did you say so?
Why did you let evil split us?
Am I nothing more than a shoulder to cry on?
BE HONEST WITH ME!
I broke my legs as I took the fall for you.


Written By: A Fallen Heroine.
Date: 25th of May 2011.
Dedication: My Savior.

© 2011 A Risen Heroine.


Author's Note

A Risen Heroine.
Ignore Grammar Problems.
Honest Opinion as always~

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Forceful

Posted 13 Years Ago


forceful message, indeed..

Posted 13 Years Ago


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TJ
So much anger and resentment and passion in this. Hell hath no fury...
Good write

Posted 13 Years Ago


"I broke my legs as i took the fall for you"
thats great!


Posted 13 Years Ago


You have such an honest transparency in your words. There is the questioning and pain that cuts deep into the heart and soul. Beautifully bittersweet...

Posted 13 Years Ago


powerful

Posted 13 Years Ago


Powerful and so much feeling in it. Honesty is the key to a true friendship or relationship. That is all.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Real friends are few in a life. People who would live and die for you are few. I like the strong and honest words. Honest words are hard to find sometime in the real world. A excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago



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