Moving In.

Depressive thoughts are moving in

They're craving their place

I can't stop them

My life seem to falter.

Author's Note

Ignore grammar Problems.
Honest opinion.

Reviews

[Dahlia Phoenix]

From these four lines, you can get a visualization of what's being done and leaving everything behind.

[TJ]

A large portrait packed into few words. I like how the poem portrays the narrator as powerless against these thoughts...gives it a sad feeling

[FaithfullyJennyBear]

For such a short peice, it's very emotive and moving.. Makes me think a lot.

Well done

Yours faithfully,
Jenny x

[Coyote Poetry]

When depression move in. Need some loud and good music. Scare them away. Easy to allow depression to take over. I want to run away and leave the B.S behind. Sometime we are locked into a life. Must be strong. I put on the Door's music. Allow my spirit to wander off for awhile. A strong poem with a sad story. Better to trick the God's. Dance and sing till death appeared. A excellent poem.
Coyote