The Dying, The Loner, A Fallen Heroine.

I’m gasping for air…

I’m dying…

I’m in a need of you…

No one really care…

I’m sitting my mind on fire…

What an ache…

I lie in my ashes…

Watching a red liquid run down the street…

I’m left bleeding…

Again…

Your voice is so far away…

Everything’s fading…

Your scream doesn’t get to me…

I can’t feel your hand on my chest…

Trying to bring me back to life...

Author's Note

Ignore grammar Problems Please.
Honest Opinion.

Reviews

[Just Cat]

O-M-G... I got shivers. First time a poem has given me shivers, well done!

[Coyote Poetry]

Strong and powerful words create some strong images. Sometime we are saved and pick-up for many good reasons. I like the emotion and the desire of the poem. Easy to get lost in life. Hard to stand on solid ground. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Hello, Goodbye]

imagery is quite effective...

[Richielee]

well i give it a big thumbs up, you captured the scene very well , i especially liked the penultimate line,it electrified the poem :)

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

This is really sad, but this was a powerful write. I really enjoyed this. Adding it to my favorites. Thanks for sharing.