I Want You To Know.

For You My Fallen Hero.

We've never been so close as we are right now
I know that my heart will stop pounding if we were apart
I would tore my soul out
I would give up living just to make you live a happily life..

 

I will not lie to you
But I have to say,
That you're My Only One
I hope to hell that you'll stay by my side forever in time..

 

I'd always thought that I was better off on my own
but from our very first kiss,
I knew I could never do it all on my own
I can't be my own cage..

 

 

You're the only one who makes me feel alive
You're all I ever want
I won't ask for anyone else but you

 

I thought I was alright
You made me realize how much I really need others..

 

The only thing I really miss
is you
I could live without writing
but
you,
I can't live without you,
My True Love
I hope to hell you know how much I love you..

 

 

I can't explain how I feel

You make me shake

You make me warm inside

I could drown in your lovely brown eyes

Everytime I feel you hand in mine,

Everytime we kiss,

I wish time would stop

I want that perfect moment to last forever..

 

 

I will never let you go..

Author's Note

Ignore Grammar Problems.
Honest Opinion.

Reviews

[Libby McKeown]

I like the direct language, and the sincerity of your emotion. I would work in more metaphor or imagery to add more mystery to your work. Make the reader work for it!! Or leave things out to create a leaner piece. Just my humble opinion! Thanks for sharing!

[Life Is Blue]

A great love poem, it really shows how much you love him and don't want to lose him.

Thanks for sharing Blue

[Coyote Poetry]

A powerful and beautiful poem of love. Hard to know when we have something good till we lose it. I like the strong description and kind desires of love. A very good ending to a excellent poem. Love is the hardest test on a heart and the mind.
Coyote