Help?

let me help you..

I wish I could take away your pain..

Please tell me what's wrong..

It's driving me insane..

I would give my life for you..

I would give up my writing to help you..

You won't even listen..

I thought I were your best girl friend...

Yet you won't even talk to me..

Let me give it a shot..

Please let me help you..

I can't live this way...

It's killing me to know how bad you feel..

She's a b***h...

Don't let her bring you down...

You're WAY better than her...

Please listen to me...

I wish I could help you through...

I beg of you...

Let me in...

You're feeling so f*****g blue...

And when you're blue, I'm blue..

 

 

Alt var så f*****g perfekt...

Så f*****g perfekt at det var en drøm...

En drøm jeg forfulgte med hjerte og sjæl..

 

(translation)

 

Everything was so f*****g perfect...

So perfect that it was a dream...

A dream I followed with my heart and soul...

 

Author's Note

Sorry about the danish sentence.. I write danish poems aswell, I just don't post them here..
Honest Opinion.
Ignore Grammar problems.

Reviews

[Dahlia Phoenix]

This reminds me when someone is in love with someone and they are trying to be there for them but they are helplessly lost in their world of pain. I love the translation you did because sometimes that brings the tension in between all.