Break Away.

Break Away.

A Poem by A Risen Heroine.
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I wanna break away from everything..

I wanna throw myself against the wall..

Make me forget what I did..

I'm so sorry..

 

 

Why did you say so?

I'm so hurt..

I don't know what to do..

 

 

You left me behind..

Yet you're not the only one who did..

I can't even visit you..

 

 

Help me break out..

Help me back up on my feet..

I don't know what to do anymore..

I'm so lost..

 

 

I shouldn't feel like this anymore..

We're okay..

Well, I hope you think so..

I love you so..

 

BREAK ME!

© 2011 A Risen Heroine.


Author's Note

A Risen Heroine.
Ignore Grammar Problems..
Honest Opinion..

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The ending is shocking, when you rolled down the screen and suddenly find the word ' Break Me'! Wow! I love the way you set the poem the format, expressing the poem itself much better as well.
Nice written!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Whoa...my mouth is literally open.
I love how you emphazied the BREAK ME at the end with bold capital letters.I
Its superb.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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