3 Painful Words.

I'm sitting here alone

waist dep in thoughts

why is my mind still racing?

 

 

"I Hate You"

I know you didn't mean it

yet those three words haunts me..

 

 

Darkness always seems to find me

I can't hide away

hide away my darkest memories..

 

 

Creatures of the dark embraces me

they bites my blood to run

I'm hiding behind closed doors.

 

 

Tears slides down my cheeks without a reason

they turns into a waterfall..

 

 

My life crashed

I felt like slitting my throat..

 

 

Now you know, I can't live without you..

 

 

Written By: A Fallen Heroine.

Date: 4th of April 2011.

Dedication: Way Too Personal..

Author's Note

Ignore Grammar Problems Please.
Honest Opinion.

Reviews

[Amanda_Rose]

those are the worst words you can hear from someone you love :/ i feel your pain through this poem

[FaithfullyJennyBear]

This poem is emotional and dark, the amount of power in it is creativly immense and everyone can relate to it :) x

[Skoo.]

Powerful and emotional, I absolutely love it. The layout is perfect (:

[BlueberryKisses]

This poem is dark and amazing, well done.

[typingaway]

Amazing!

[tekphobik]

There's a raw desperation to the poem that is intriguing. You might want to work a little on your imagery though, it's purpose and poignancy.