I Love You..

I Love You..

A Poem by A Risen Heroine.
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Babe if you're reading this

then I want you to know

that I won't let you go..

I can't live without you..

If you let go

then I have to accept it

yet it will be so f*****g painful to be without you..

Babe, I'll loev you till the end of time

not less, probably even longer..

I want no one but you..

You're the love of my life..

My only one..

My soulmate..

I loev you..

I can't live without you..

I won't live my life without you..

 

Your Fallen Heroine

© 2011 A Risen Heroine.


Author's Note

A Risen Heroine.
Ignore Grammar Problems Please.
Honest Opinion.

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Honestly, I find your holding back way to much. It reads clear and full and is punctuated with emotion and crass imagery, but I feel you could impact more with detail, well done.

Posted 13 Years Ago


nicely done!

Posted 13 Years Ago


This is amazing, I love all your poems, you express yourself too well :)
Great write x

Posted 13 Years Ago


Again, amazing way to express yourself(:
amazing write!

Posted 13 Years Ago



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