Burn B***h Burn.

Burn B***h Burn.

A Poem by A Risen Heroine.
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This is what I do in science class :P

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I'm standing here

with joy in my eyes

watching you scream

watching you burn.

 

 

The flames is licking up on you

you're covered in a red fire.

 

 

As you cries for help

beg of me to save you

as you whisper my name

my midle finger gets a boner.

 

 

As I walk away. Smiling. You lay there in the gray ashes of yours.

© 2011 A Risen Heroine.


Author's Note

A Risen Heroine.
Ignore Grammar Problems.
Honest Opinion.


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OMG! This is heartless! A very good write in expressing what you really feel inside. Good job!

Posted 13 Years Ago


lol. boner. that was unexpected humor at the end of a seriously disturbing poem. niceee

Posted 13 Years Ago


I like your rage!

Posted 13 Years Ago


'my midle finger gets a boner'
lol, true emotion, you have a lot of rage

Posted 13 Years Ago


I love it, describing the flames as 'licking up on you' is great :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


F****n' wicked! I love it.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Wooow, well I'll admit, that was pretty creepy.
I understand the feeling, I've never wished anybody to burn. But I've hated before.
People are hurtful a lot of the time, causing a lot of hate!
Keep on being strong, don't let it get you down.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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