Chains Of Sorrow.

Heavenly Father

save me

I wanna breath

yet I can't find air.

 

 

What should I do?

Pray, over and over?

it won't help

The Lord ignores my cry.

 

 

Who tightens the chains?

those painful chains of sorrow

is all I feel.

 

 

I'll kill The Killer because of my choice

 

I'll kill My Fallen Hero if something bad happens to us

if I kill myself, I'll kill both of you..'

 

I can't offer you my life..

it ain't better..

 

How come you guys can kill yourself because of me?

it's kinda killing me to know

what damage I'll cause..

 

I love you Fallen.

 

 

Written By: A Fallen Heroine.

Date: 29th of March.

Dedication: A Fallen Hero and The Killer..

Author's Note

Ignore Grammar Problems.
Honest Opinion.

Reviews

[Amanda_Rose]

im not relgious so i dont think i can appreciate this poem as much as most people may. i would recommend using more formal words than "wanna" or "how come you guys"

[Kelsie Eileen Stark]

The Lord doesn't ignore your cries. Nor anyones in that matter. You have to listen, and if you ask out of greed, you will not recieve- but out of love then yes. Things don't happen as fast as life goes- you have to wait.
Otherwise, very sad piece- describing pain and indulgence within love.