Your last breath.

Dedicated to a lot fuckers in my life..

Scream f****r scream

You better pray

A Fallen Heroine will be

The last thing you'll ever see.

 

 

Cry b***h cry

Beg for your life

The knife will be

The last thing you'll ever feel.

 

 

Beg slob beg

This will be your last breath

Scream my name

As I kill you slowly.

 

 

I have had enough of you and your fucked up bullshit.

 

 

Written by: A Fallen Heroine.

Date: 23th of march.

Dedication: the fuckers in my life.

Author's Note

Ignore Grammar Problems Please.
Honest Opinion.

Reviews

[M.Babu]

Whoa...definitely that dark tinge you have has been intensified to tint in this piece.
Very very dark!

[Dream Weaver]

Lots of anger and hostility here, you have the rest of
your life to find friends or so called friends they treat
you how you treat them...Good luck.. BTW nice venting!

[Amanda_Rose]

ahhh anger! scary, but def gets the point across. wouldn't wanna be your enemy ;) haha

[Apathy To Empathy]

i scared a bit V.V But if u do kill me (lol?) i'll see you in the afterlife hun. We'll be the best of friends ^^ Yup! Great write!!

[typingaway]

Great work!!
You show 'em. ;)

[Lowesy]

.....i'm slightly scared, would you kill me if i said you made a mistake? 2nd stanza, 2nd line, beg of your life, should it be beg for your life? can I ask, is the Fallen Heroine you? because she's in a few of your poems and shizzle and I was just wondering