The Liar.

Look, everyone nods
As they see what I do
Yet inside
I'm nothing
Nothing at all.

When I look at the mirror
All I see is A Fallen Heroine
Pretty on the outside
Yet the mirror lies
It doesn't show how shatterd I am.

I have to find a betterway
I gotta go through hells arms once again
I gotta face my fear..

My eyes are searching
Where's a better way?
Where's my faith?
Where's my courage?
My strength is gone.

I'm not the only one who cries for help
We're a lot who can't help ourselfs.

Author's Note

Ignore Grammar Problems Please.
Honest Opinion.

Reviews

[Amanda_Rose]

When I look at the mirror
All I see is A Fallen Heroine
Pretty on the outside
Yet the mirror lies
It doesn't show how shatterd I am.

..... you and I both. your poems are usually very relatable. its impressive.

[Apathy To Empathy]

Look at the two of us. We're stuck in a world where we can hide on the outside but never on the inside. I am here for you!!

[M.Babu]

Pretty on the outside..shattered on the inside.
As is sometimes the case. Many people can't tell when someone's just putting up a front or really OK. I like how your monologue brings so many thwarting questions to the readers mind about your state. You have brought out the tone of confusion very well here A.F.H.
Very good attempt here:)

[kieran cruz]

Nicely written
The thoughts are very deep
It's wonderful, I quite liked it

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

I liked this poem. It was well written and sad like normal. You did a good job on this poem. A mirror can always hide what's truly on the inside...a mirror can't show what's on the inside...but it can show the prettiness on the outside. Thanks for sharing.