The Helpless, The Worthless, A Fallen Heroine.

My granmother inspired me.. thanks granny.

You're drowning in your pain

I'm standing there looking at you

pity is taking over.

 

 

 

Your eyes filled with tears

you sighs and tries to covers it up

I reach out for you mentally

I'm not able to reach out for your hand.

 

 

 

Your face all wet

your eyes red

you have had no sleep

you're lying awake at night.

 

 

 

All I do is standing here

watching you fall

faster and faster

deeper and deeper

into the eternal darkness.

 

 

 

I wish I had the strength

the strength to help you back up

to pull you away from the flames of darkness.

Author's Note

Ignore Grammar Problems.
Honest Opinion as always..

Reviews

[Apathy To Empathy]

Keep fighting!!!!!!!!!!
You are strong!! I know you are!! But this poem was great, and I'm so sorry you feel this way! I wish I could take you pain away...Really...

[the in between]

My honest opinon... It was very emotional that I felt like crying and that I was in that position. Very empathetic poem and amazing imagry.

[Akshat♥]

this is good makes you good..
great write...nice work..keep it up..
and keep writing like that:)

[FallenHeroXx]

Babe..
You have the strength just keep it up..


Love

Fallen