Nothing But Silence.

You wanna throw it all

throw it all against the dark walls

dark walls is moving

moving closer to you.

 

 

 

Dark walls pushes you down

you have to seal your emotions

you keep telling yourself not to scream out loud.

 

 

 

No one listens

no one cares

no one dare

to come you near.

 

 

 

You're all alone

no one to run to

no one likes you

you're keeping it all inside.

Author's Note

Ignore Grammar Problems.
Honest Opinion as always.

Reviews

This was so sad, I really felt the pain and loneliness behind this one.
I like the idea of "dark walls". It's a place I've been to a lot!
Great write, as always!

[Apathy To Empathy]

I agree with the in between.

[the in between]

passive agressions sucks. i do this at times. It's best to let it out somehow. I like the way you described it was like dark walls pushing down these awful emotions, but really no one is alone. Loved it

[Chris Smith Welshpoetcs]

I can relate, many times have I hidden behind dark walls.

[M.Babu]

Dramatically poignant.
Keep writing/venting

[Akshat♥]

sometime i feel this way only...
i sit alone in dark thinking that where is my life going..
where i made mistakes..
i felt sad reading this though..nice poem:)

[FallenHeroXx]

Great write

Fallen