The Lifecrasher.

The Lifecrasher.

A Poem by A Risen Heroine.
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I feel so f*****g quilty

this is all my fault

I caused those bloody wounds..

 

 

 

I'm breaking

I'm standing on the edge

drowning in my own tears..

 

 

 

Shame on me

I'm only causing you pain

nothing but pure pain..

 

 

 

 

I'm quilty

I admit it

even my existence strangles you..

 

 

 

 

I'm living my life in this hell

there's no way out

no light of happiness

the path of happiness is long gone..

 

 

 

 

I'm causing you pain

yet I know

if I left this world

I would also kill you..

© 2011 A Risen Heroine.


Author's Note

A Risen Heroine.
Ignore Grammar Problems.
Honest Opinion.

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quilty? like a quilt. I take that as you did it on pupose because it makes sense when you say it strangels like string probubly does. very sad poem but about guilt

Posted 13 Years Ago


....WHy must we be so similar?
Scary, dark, and me and you and others too.


Posted 13 Years Ago


Scary s**t babe.
I liked the dark depressing feel but still it scared the living f**k outta me..

Love Fallen

Posted 13 Years Ago


This is a good poem, I can honestly relate to it, and instead of 'exist' you should but 'existence' I'm sorry I pointed it out but I have a weird thing about grammer :P other than that, you're a great poet :)

Posted 13 Years Ago



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