The Same Old.

The Same Old.

A Poem by A Risen Heroine.
"

Yeah it's all just the same old.

"

This is just the same old story

pleasure and pain walks hand in hand

losing the ones I care about

what a hell

happens over and over.

 

 

 

This is the same old

losing my will

losing you

gets everything bottled up inside

I thought it was different

hell no this is just the same old.

 

 

 

You're like The Murder

the one who killed me on the inside

if I make a mistake

you get pissed at me.

 

 

 

I think I have had enough

I've drawnm this for too long

why the hell am I holding on

holding on with both hands?

 

 

Your life so perfect

no mistakes

no f*****g agony

sometimes I wish you knew what agony is

then you might now how I feel inside.

 

 

It's all just the same old.

© 2011 A Risen Heroine.


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Wow, I really, really like this. The repetition of the title "The Same Old" kinda parallels the repetitive nature of being hurt over and over again... Thanks for the RR (:

Posted 13 Years Ago


This is a really good poem, I can relate to this too. You're great at writing, and getting your feelings out

Posted 13 Years Ago


sometimes I wish you knew what agony is

then you might now how I feel inside.
you ended it with a respond from you
u didn't only cry for your pain

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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