The Strength To Go On?

Sorry about the name I don't know what to name it..

I'm standing here wondering

Why am I still here?

Is it time to move on?

To go further?

 

 

 

This is not what I'm dreaming of

yet I'm holding on with both hands

I won't let go of it.

 

 

 

 

I believe that The Lord

gives us the strength to go on

dear Lord I'm strong enough

embrace me.

 

 

 

I can't concentrate

hate fills my mind

you're all I see

covered in this red liquid.

Author's Note

Ignore Grammar Problems.
Honest Opinion.

Reviews

God doesn't always answer us like we think... We ask for strength and he will give it but we wont always see it, but he's heard you cry. He knows what you're going through, this I promise!
A great poem, I could really feel the desperation of not going anywhere. But hang on there don't give up!

[FallenHeroXx]

Babe I'm sorta scared by this.
Remember me in every way that will help you..
Other than that pretty good job.
I liked it :)

Love Ya

Fallen

[Kelsie Eileen Stark]

I'm in complete agreement with Chels. Wonderful and hoenstly written....

[Apathy To Empathy]

keep fighting!!