The Hate Filled Heroine.

Yeah, Hate Fills My soul.

I've tasted the dirt for so long

I never got the chance to get up

get back up on my feet

as I reached out for a hand

you pulled me back down.

 

 

You dragged me through hells arms

you're the source of my darkest days,

my darkest memories,

my darkest thoughts

you're the reason I'm filled with hate.

 

 

 

If I ever get the chance

then I would beat the crap out of you

you killed me inside

you murder!

 

 

 

As I suffered in my darkest days

you laughed your f*****g a*s off

I felt the hate flow in my veins,

the flames in my heart

and a fire in my body.

 

 

 

I lived on your beautiful

yet f*****g fake lies for half a year

I didn't realize what you did to me

nor what you planed to do.

 

 

 

Fake laughs

fake smiles

fake personality

it's quite obvious how f*****g fake you are

just look deep down to your soul

then you'll see what you can't see in the mirror.

 

 

 

No matter how much I try

I won't be able to let go of my

hate to you

it grows bigger and bigger

day by day.

 

 

 

The hate to you makes me high

to see you suffer makes me smile

no matter how much I try

I can't hide my joy.

 

 

 

The joy in your eyes

makes me wanna throw up

hell I wanna kill you

take away your perfect life

drag you through hell

then kill you on the inside

just to make you feel

how I felt.

 

 

 

 

I wanna throw you against the wall

then help you back up

back up on your feet

then throw you to the ground

just to show you how it feels

when you're the one others throws

around like a piece of s**t.

 

 

 

You never thought about me

getting back up

neither did I

until I reached out

to grab the strength to confront you

once and for all.

 

Author's Note

Ignore Grammar Problems.
Honest Opinion.

Reviews

[iamkim]

You have improved a lot! I like this one :) The real emotions you have while writing this piece just made this writing a great and powerful one! The imagery here is a bomb! I love it! Thanks for sharing :)

[M.Babu]

Frustratingly good. Descriptive and emotional. You are still improving. Keep writing, let it all out

[FallenHeroXx]

anger. Hate. Deceit.
..
I Love this piece right here!!!
You found my footsteps!!! :D
I love this!!!

Love Ya.

Fallen

[Kelsie Eileen Stark]

Very powerful, strong emotions....well done

[{A}shley {B}lack @-;-]

You want honesty well hear it is - - - this is my favourite poem you have written so full of raw pain and anger its like this person is dead to you or at least as good as dead and they caused so much s**t and this is your big middle finger as they try to reach again :)

this angry type of poetry is exactly why I joined this site because I needed to vent my anger and its such a release and the pain and frustration is emitted throughout this poem

my favourite line is "I lived on your beautiful,yet f*****g fake lies for half a year" just a killer line really well done with this

thank you for sharing 100/100 from me