My Savior.

My Savior

 

The loose of My Savior

is even worse than I'd ever thought

I'll never get the chance to heal..

 

 

The sharp pain

the deep wound

as it starts to heal

I'll rip it up

I won't let it..

 

 

There's no way in hell

I can win

no matter how much I struggle

I'll loose My Savior..

 

 

The agony

so painful

so real

there's no way in hell

I could make it up

I've never felt as bad as I do right now..

 

 

I lost you

well, I kinda did

you haven't said the last 4 words

"Just Go F**k Yourself"

yet I know you will.

Someday..

 

 

My Fallen Hero

is the only one

who keeps me from falling apart

no one does it as perfect as he does

he's the only one I can rely on..

 

 

Yet the damage

the agony

grows even worse

second by second

it digs deeper

'till I'll break into pieces..

 

 

How the hell can I go on?

You promised me you would stay

that you wouldn't leave me half way

yet that's f*****g what you did..

 

 

A Fallen Heroine

Date: 06/03/2011

Dedication: My Savior..

Author's Note

Ignore Grammar Problems Please..
Honest Oppinion..

Reviews

[falling_toxic_rain]

straight to the point, i like this, but i tend to like most of your work... its really good:)

[M.Babu]

"The agony
so painful
so real..."
I really connected with the above part. I thoroughly felt the emotion in the quoted lines. The fear, desperation and anxiety is tangible in this piece and I applaud this effort.

[al25]

This is really amazing. I like how real and raw it is. Enjoyable read :)

[iamkim]

I love this piece. The emotions are strong. Good job!

[kyrie]

Undefined grief blots these pages in words of loss. You have crafted a heartfelt masterpiece of sorrow, and given it color and life. Congratulations on a truly honest write.

[FallenHeroXx]

Nice write.. I love it.. Really, really good..

Fallen