A Fallen Heroine Will Arise

You fucked me over

you broke me down

you f*****g w***e

left me in the cold.

 

 

The last look at your face

makes me wanna throw up

your bittersweet smile

oh so f*****g fake.

 

 

You bloody s**t

f***s everyone

how I wish you could see

how f*****g fake you are.

 

 

You think you can control everyone

no way

not me

you never will

I'm not giving in!

 

A Fallen Heroine reaches for the light,

the strength to beat you

the strength to kill you.

Author's Note

Ignore Grammar problems.
Honest Oppinion Please.

Reviews

[Arabdha]

your words exude raw hatred..well written

[iamkim]

I felt a very strong feeling of hate through your words.

Nice one!

[Midday_Mystery]

Damn This could be a good song lyric... Excellent work Sandra

[*skittlez*]

very amazing

WOOOW haha, this was insane poetry! It was pretty twisted, I admit, but I liked it. Your raw anger really shines in poetry, in a good way.
It really makes me mad at whoever this person is. But I guess life's all about letting go and moving on, right!?!? It's hard to let go though, I know.
Very good write, your poetry is getting quite amazing!

[FallenHeroXx]

Really good :) I liked this poem a lot.

Back to the anger I see. Nice to see you never lost touch of that emotion. And it's really cool that you can write like you did in the beginning. I liked it then and I like it now. All in all a nice poem.

Best Regards

Fallen

[Apathy To Empathy]

Totally so cool! The emotions explode off the page with each character written. Well done, well done!!