The Lust.

The lust

ain't what you're used to

the devil got your hands

you're ust a puppet.

 

 

The devil in your mind

the evil in your heart

your life in control

the devil is taking over.

 

 

Your hand right to my cheek

your knee right to my stomache

the evil laugh of yours

the smile grows bigger.

 

 

Bloodstains down my head

blood on my hands

a black eye

I can barely see you walk away.

Laughing.

 

 

Here I am

covered in blood

my own blood

in a need of My Fallen Hero.

Author's Note

Ignore Grammar Problems.
Honest Oppinion Please.

Reviews

[M.Babu]

Bloodstains down my head
blood on my hands
a black eye
I can barely see you walk away.
Laughing.
This was well said. I'm really a closet dark writer and i rarely bring my darkness to the surface. but this i definitely enjoyed. Deep and i like how your style changed a bit. definitely growing. Keep writing

[Theodore]

this is good, keep up the good work

[iamkim]

This is good!

Sometimes the lust overruled ones mind which will eventually lead into serious crimes just like the one you have written.

[Midday_Mystery]

This is a another powerful piece, Truly action packed and seriously intence. Great job!

[*skittlez*]

very good i liked it and yea just alil mistakes but it was very good

A new style of poetry for you, usually your poems are inspired by anger and emotions. But this was dark. I'm not fan of dark writing but it was well written.

[Apathy To Empathy]

All I can say is:

Yeah, speechless!
Great write honey!

[FallenHeroXx]

This was really a good read :)
I liked the dark passionate blood style thing :)

Great Job

Fallen

[{A}shley {B}lack @-;-]

I really liked this defiantly my style of writing dark and intriguing another good write by one of my growing favourites toy have a true talent please keep them coming

100/100

[fallen.angel.]

amazing !!
imma like this
*like*
ahahah