Being Afraid.

I've felt it way too long

I've tried to for so long

everytime I touch it

everything turns into darkness.

 

 

I felt the flames

I know what to fear

the last pieces of my happiness

is burned into ashes.

 

 

My heart

my head

will explode

break into a thousand tiny pieces

impossible to fix.

 

 

I'm so f*****g afraid

I've found

light

happiness

and love.

 

 

I'm afriad to loose it

afraid of the darkness

I know it will surround me

sooner or later.

 

 

your touch chases away

every worry of mine

your lips the touch of an angel

so soft and filled with love.

 

 

I'm afraid of losing you

you're all I'm breathing for

I need you more than air

food to eat

and water to drink.

Author's Note

Ignore Grammar Problems.
Honest Oppinion.

Reviews

[M.Babu]

Nice description of your fear of losing your love. It's something we all experience at one point or another and your words perfectly put that into perspective. I really enjoyed the fifth stanza btw:) good job with this one

[Midday_Mystery]

This is a great poem. Shows your true feelings and shows that you are capable of loving even though its a scary sensation.... great Job!

[kyrie]

This is good, I like it. I know that fear. But, I'm glad you stepped out of the darkness, and found some things worth living for. Cherish every moment, and you will have nothing to fear. *huggle* Great write, dearie.

[Apathy To Empathy]

Hun, i've been in your shoes too many times. It is hard. But you will never lose me. :) I'm here for you. But you're strong! You can endure!

[Akshat♥]

awesome poem..liked it..
afraid of losing someone dear to you...is so hard
every time you feel terrified of that..
:)

[iamkim]

I love this! I can feel every word you wrote. Nice!

[Cynthia]

A very strong, powerful poem. You had described the feelings really well, and also, the way you talk about the affect of those emotions. And I love the way ending up happily, finding the one you need and get healed and the darkness were gone. However, I got a suggestion, I think you can do more describing on the changes, maybe add one more stanza to it :)
Overall, I love it really much.
Wonderful