I Am Just Me.

Yeah I am just me.

I am just me

nothing to change

someone tells me I'm Satans daughter

maybe, I'm not afraid of standing up for myself.

 

 

The lonely hours

the long  day grows longer

a broken soul

no one to talk to.

 

 

My body is empty

the emptiness makes me think

"What do I live for?"

Yet I'm still breathing.

 

 

All my nightmares

keeps haunting me

I see them all day long

I dream of them at night

I can't let go of them.

 

 

I am Falling

no one listens

no one cares

my veins burns

my lungs pierced.

 

 

Yeah, I bet I need time

the time

I'm afraid it will destroy me

yet, I'm still breathing.

Author's Note

Ignore Grammar Problems Please.
This poem is inspired by; We Are The Fallen, Scary Kids Scaring Kids and myself.
Honest Oppinion Please.

Reviews

[Arabdha]

nicely written..keep up the good work !

[Theodore]

this is deep i love it keep up the good work...

[M.Babu]

My body is empty
the emptiness makes me think
"What do I live for?"
Yet I'm still breathing.

Yeah, I bet I need time
the time
I'm afraid it will destroy me
yet, I'm still breathing.
These stanzas were so deep i went breathless for sometime there. How you convey your emotion with simple wording and good phrasing just makes them all the more sentimental. I felt the power in your words throughout this poem and i was very captivated. I enjoy reading your work and remembering how far you've come. Keep writing!! I promise i'll keep reading. Magnificent job

[kyrie]

I can relate well to this poem. Despite all weve done, all we go through, all we fight...in the end, we're just ourselves. Strong, Alive, and Breathing. Great write.

[Midday_Mystery]

This as usual a great write... Wonderful job

[iamkim]

do what you want to do, live your life the way you like it to, because even if you do good or bad, it really doesn't matter anyway, people have always something to say.

[Cynthia]

Being who you are is the most beautiful thing in the world, keep being who you and what you want to be, you don't really need to care what other says, be yourself.
Everyone feel lost sometimes, wondering why we're still living here.

Its a really powerful poem filled with emotions, amazing writing of the dark side of life, a wonderful writing!
Amazing!

[Kelsie Eileen Stark]

Being yourself is what makes us beautiful...wonderful job!

[hannajade]

love this like I do with all of your poems!

[Chelsea]

You are just you, and that is perfect! Don't let anything bring you down.