My Only One.

This feel so right

our lips

as they touch

the whole world disappear

a thousand devils will try to tear us apart

none of them will ever have the strength.

 

 

I'm walking around with this special feeling

the feeling of being with the right one

the one who loves me for me

because I love you for you

I wouldn't change a thing about you babe.

 

 

The Ugly will disappear

The Dream Killer will be gone

the victory burn in our veins

our love will last forever.

 

 

I hope you know how much I love you

I can't explain it with words

no words can ever be that powerful

or filled with enough love.

 

As we close our eyes

grabs each others hands

kisses

says "I love you"

we jump off the edge of the cliff.

 

 

Written By A Fallen Heroine AKA His Fallen Heroine

Date: 22 of February

Dedication: A Fallen Hero AKA My Fallen Hero

 

 

 

Author's Note

Ignore Grammar Problems Please.
Honest Oppinion.

Reviews

[M.Babu]

This feel so right
our lips
as they touch
the whole world disappear
a thousand devils will try to tear us apart
none of them will ever have the strength.

I hope you know how much I love you
I can't explain it with words
no words can ever be that powerful
or filled with enough love.

This is one of your most beautiful works. I am truly awed that you've grown so much and now can express such love in magnetic and emotional words. There was a refined flow about this poem and the structure was great.

Completely breathtaking. VERY GOOD JOB here. Hope you realise that

[Arabdha]

wow..its such a beautiful confession of love..and i agree with Kyrie..love the ending..

[kyrie]

Wonderful! I love the way it ends--in death. But even death cannot stop love. No love is as perfect as that one that is bruised and scarred and hard work, because that is the one that is true love. :)

[Midday_Mystery]

Good job !!!!! Stand up to those nightmares... Dont let them bully you no more!

[*skittlez*]

love it

[{A}shley {B}lack @-;-]

Beautifully written great imagery really captures the emotions and emits pure love to which we all crave keep the great poetry coming

[iamkim]

very nice... very passionate :)

[Cynthia]

I love it so much! Talking about how love wins all the other things, the devils... the demons were all banished under your love... I am really happy that you found your love while he find his.. I can see you guys are really in love with all the poems you wrote... readers can feel it, the love...

Overall, its a sweet, romantic poem, I love the whole poem, especially how it says love defeats the evils :)
Amazing!

[Margaret Marie Hubbard]

Sweet romantic poem. :)

[Chelsea]

Such great poetry, I'm glad you and Fallen have found each other. I think it's a wonderful thing!
Great poem!