Suffer In Silence.

This is an old poem I wrote back in December 2010.

You w***e

You’re pleased to see me suffer

Yes I know you hate me

Yet you were my best friend!

 

 

As the f*****g memories of you

Appears in my mind

I feel a fire burning in my body

Hell I hate you

You love to see me suffer in silence.

 

 

Yet, everything’s up site down

I’m the one

Who’s looking at you

With pleasure in my eyes

As YOU suffer in silence.

 

 

You lauged at me

You broke me down

You f*****g made me cry over and over

Yes it’s my turn

My turn to be pleased

Now you know

How I felt

How I felt when you looked at me all pleased

 

 

Now you’re asking me to help you

I know I would if you hadn’t been such an idiot to me

Such a b*****d

Hell no

I want to see you suffer

You’ve never been through what I experienced

This is all you got

You broke down because of the death of you cat?

 

 

And you tells me

you're suffering even more than I did?

Nah not at all.

 

 

You tells me I'm cheap?

Well, I'm not the one who

kisses a new boy every weekend?

I'm not the one who f***s every guy who's having a lust?

No, that's so you!

 

 

 

A Fallen Heroine

Written back in December 2010

Dedication: The girl I hate..

 

 

 

Author's Note

Ignore Grammar Problems Please.
Yes this is how I felt back in December 2010... She fucking fucked me over all the time.

Reviews

[kyrie]

Definitely agressive. That hatred that smolders and brings you the plesure of seeing you suffer--unfortunately it hardly ever happens when we want. Sometimes we don't get to see it at all. But! Knowing that they're the ones in the wrong constantly lets you remember that the joke's on THEM, not you. So awesome job for standing up for what you believe in! *bug hug*

[Apathy To Empathy]

Wow...I've been there before. Heart ripped apart by a girl you thought was your friend...UGH!! I hate that!! HAte it hate it hatehatehate it!!!!!!

But i will never do that to you! NEVER!!

[Midday_Mystery]

Thats telling her !!!!! Good job and really agressive piece

[Cynthia]

powerful poem! You had done the correct thing, you GOT to stand up against her! If she hurts you so badly, I dont think why you need to help her again!
Nice Written!

[Marie Harrison]

What a powerful voice you have in this poem. It keeps getting stronger and stronger. You have some misspelled words though. Fabulous work.

[M.Babu]

Brutal. Enough said

[Peter Joseph Swanson]

Cathartic!

[Kelsie Eileen Stark]

This is sad...