Unwanted.

Unwanted.

A Poem by A Risen Heroine.
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Written because I'm kinda unwanted.

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Laugh's all over
Yet there’s one
In the corner
No one listens
No one cares.


People is afraid of differences
Someone more than others
All the lonely person needs is a warm heart
Someone who’d welcome it
An open mind.


That person
Could be so damn special
Even better than others
Yet everyone pushes it away
No one likes it.


As it sits there
All alone in the cold gloomy corner
Looking at all those happy teenagers
It feels so depressive
It can’t help it
It’s an unwanted person.

© 2011 A Risen Heroine.


Author's Note

A Risen Heroine.
Ignore Grammar Problems Please.
Honest Oppinion.

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This is a really great write. It's truthful and insightful. No, people don't want to open their minds to someone who is different, but they're missing out on a wonderful part of nature, of this world. We weren't all made the same way--we're masterpieces BECAUSE of our differences, not IN SPITE of them. *huggle* Much love, dearie.

Posted 13 Years Ago


I understand on where you coming from witht this one i feel the same.

Posted 13 Years Ago


I love it!! No lie, I'm pretty sure I know why, but it's deep dude, wanna read more of your writing...

Posted 13 Years Ago


Babe.. You're not unwanted :) you're not supposed to feel like this..
You know that you mean the world to me right?
If i haven't told you before..
You do..

All in all a great poem.. I liked the dark touch..

Fallen

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

thats really sad, but you ARENT unwanted! I can relate to this really well, and I hope you'll feel better as soon as possible. Its not good to feel unwanted for so long, so, cheer up!
I agree with Chelsea, you're special!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Very sad :( I am usually well liked and things like that so I can't relate but I can imagine. It must be hard having all of this bottled up and nobody to tell this to.
Your very special and don't ever think anything but that!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Such a dark and ominous poem.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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