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Compartment 114
Compartment 114
Not enough.

Not enough.

A Poem by A Risen Heroine.
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One thing's true

you're myeverything

my words can't describe

how much I love you

I know that for a fact

no word is strong enough

not enough love in any way.

 

 

Your body against mine

your lips so soft

so delicious

so f*****g lovely

I can't live without you

you mean the f*****g world to me.

 

 

I hope you can see

right to my heart

there's no cracks anymore

no f*****g agony at the moment

you made me whole

you

yes just you

I love you.

 

 

If I ever loose you

I wouldn't live on

I can't

you mean too much to me

my life will never be the same

you showed me how it feels

not to feel any agony

and how my feelings really are.

 

 

now I know

I'll never be alone

neither will you

you're by my side

I'm by yours

we're like two hearts

one mind.

 

 

As our lips meets

the whole world disappears

nothing is real

all I know is we're real.

 

I just know my words ain't enough

enough to explain my feelings to you

not even my kiss

neither is my hugs

yet I hope you know

how much I love you babe.

 

 

As I sheds a tear

I see you in my mind

you're all I'm thinking of

you're all I want

you're all I need.

 

 

A Fallen Heroine AKA His Fallen Heroine

Dedication: A Fallen Hero

Written: 18.02 2011 6:27 pm

 

 

 

 

© 2011 A Risen Heroine.


Author's Note

A Risen Heroine.
Ignore Grammar Problems.

Sorry I keep writing such poems, I just can't stop ^^'
I love you Fallen<3

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Hey, I liked this few things though, I don't think the swearing fits in with it, I understand passion but this kind of passion doesn't need it, also might I suggest where you've got 2 hearts 1 mind I would say 1 heart 2 minds, that would imply love a bit more
Mark

Posted 13 Years Ago


This is true and heartfelt. There is unfaultering tangible emotion in your words and the feeling conveyed is just astounding. Don't apologize! You write what's in your heart, what inspires you! Good job on this one.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Its so cute and sweet! You should keep writing this wonderful poems!
Its great you uses poem to express your feeling!
Amazing!

Posted 13 Years Ago


This is adoreable, don't stop writting these Terrific

Posted 13 Years Ago


This is sweet.. :)
Thank you babe :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


Don't feel sorry! :) It's a great write and it shows how you feel. I like it.

Posted 13 Years Ago


A very honest poem.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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