Great. Just......the picture of what people do. How ignorant they are. How they never try to help. How they never, ever.......can help. How they don't know a thing about a life like this, and if they did they suppressed it cause they don't want to deal with it. At least we're fighting back,. Sometimes we fall, sometimes we give up, but we still get back up. And if we're lost to this, then it is not our fault. Wonderful job, Heroine. *hugs*
If anyone say this things to you and you don't even like it, ignore them, dont say a word to them, they will just do it again and again cause they wont to see you torn apart, I mean mentally. Thats how I feel when I stand up for myself against someone bullying me, and all I feel is that they do it all once again.
This poem is really strong, and the format of it makes it even stronger! Its one of my favourite of your writing till now, nice written!
Awesome poem! I must say how creative your idea was, to cross out the lines!
I know it feels pretty s****y, huh. When people say crap like that behind your back. I sometimes get that. But annoy them, they don't know what you're going through.... Don't let it get you down.
Another great poem! Packed with emotion, truth, and so gripping!
Great job A Fallen Heroine!
Wow, Those people that do that are pieces of crap and they dont even deserve to breathe the same air as you!!!!! You are terrific and always remember that... Wonderful poem.
People who say that; just ignore them. They want others to suffer for their own amusement. You have your own choices, Don't let others choose for you. Be who you want to be, not what they tell you to be.