The Strength.

My time has come

I don’t have the strength to go on

I’m losing my will.

 

 

I am what I am

But I don’t have the strength to go on

I wanna lie down.

 

 

A f*****g thousand lies

Hell I wish you could feel how I feel

The f*****g agony I’m having.

 

 

Your life

My life

our life

Ain’t no longer connected in any way

Because I don’t have the strength to go on.

 

 

I want a better way

a better way to feel

no more agony

no more f*****g fake lies

no more lies of yours.

 

 

I want the strength to go on.

Author's Note

Anyone who can relate?

Fake or not?
Anyone who think I should stop feeling blue?
Let me know what you think
Let out your feelings in poems
Everybody should feel better
No one likes to be depressed.

Help others
Everyone need strength
Roof or floor?
One or two?
In or out?
No one likes to question it self
Everybody need help.

Leave A Review If You Like.

(haha sorry about the length but I had some fun doing some sentenses with the first letter in my name A Fallen Heroine, no need to answer it :P)

Reviews

[kyrie]

Realistic and biting. I know the rage, the despair, the agony, the horror, the terror, the hatred. Well done. Ver well done.

[Marie Harrison]

I can certainly relate.

[Steph's_romantic_myster..]

This is agreat piece and it is cool to do stuff like this, It will greatly improve your grammer and keep you writing. You are an excellent writer!

[Cynthia]

I can relate to it, very much, itsusually happens to me, and I think others can relate to it as well! Its not fake, can feel the emotion inside. Well, I think for your own good, you SHOULD top feeling blue, keep a smile on your face! Its powerful, a great write!
Amazing!

[Dream Weaver]

Lots of people fall victim to lies and heartache.
It seems it zaps the strength we normally pocess
till we lie battered and defeated. Yet the sun
rises with the promise of a new day and new
strength...Nice write.

[FallenHeroXx]

Nice :)