Give It All Up.

Give It All Up.

A Poem by A Risen Heroine.
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I'm so sick and tired

of fighting all this crap inside

wanna throw up my hands

and give it all up.

 

 

My life

nothing but a f*****g agony

nothing but lies

I'm nothing at all.

 

 

I'm so sad

I wish I could cry

 I'm so mad

I wish I could scream my lungs out.

 

 

I'm useless

worthless

and helpless..

 

 

6 months

yet I f*****g can't forgive nor forget

your words is stuck in my mind

I can't get rid of them.

 

 

 

© 2011 A Risen Heroine.


Author's Note

A Risen Heroine.
Ignore Grammar Problems Please.
Honest Oppinion.

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Wow this was brutally honest. Great job!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Never give up, fight for yourself till the last second! You got to do something if you don't like whats happening , fight for it! Its a great poem, strong and powerful, and also relateble. Great Job, and hope you feel better soon!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Don't give up! Don't throw those hands up! FIght until the end! We all feel this way, hun, and the worst part is waiting for it to pass. So anxious in desquise, so paranoid in a hurry. BUt it will pass. All I ask is that you fight until your dying day. :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


Shocking, honest and exciting (we all feel that way)

Posted 13 Years Ago


Get all the ange and the hatred out.... You are expressing yourself well and you need to vent and release it... Good job

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on February 10, 2011
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