Dear Agony.

Dear Agony

faceless enemy

I'm suffering slowly.

 

 

My worst enemy

my best friend

yes the darkest agony.

 

 

The darkest days

those painful memories

my broken heart.

 

 

The walls, huge and black

no windows

no doors

no light.

 

 

My life

no longer worth saving

neither is my dreams.

 

 

My dearest agony

let me go

my worst enemy laughs

I can't escape.

Author's Note

Ignore Grammar Problems.
Honest Oppinion.

Reviews

[alec merdin]

Really nice and simple i enjoyed reading it and i look forward to reading more of your stuff i hope it is as beautiful as this.

[Marie Harrison]

I recognized Breaking Benjamin too. Well done!

[Steph's_romantic_myster..]

Wow, this is powerful and deep........

[Margaret Marie Hubbard]

Put your own twist on the BB tune. Sweet!

[FallenHeroXx]

BB!
Awesome song reminder... xD
Yea nice write..

Fallen

[Apathy To Empathy]

This reminds of a song by Breaking Benjamin! NIce write though, and I LOVED IT!!

[Chelsea]

This is so neat--- You have a love hate relationship here with agony. I totally get it though--
Clever!