My Angel.

A new happy poem~

My angel

My dearest angel

The gorgeous white angel from above

Is spreading his wings

Surrounds me

Covers me in white soft feathers.

 

His arms

So strong

Warm

And lovely

Nothing could ever be

Better than this.

 

He tells me I had had enough of pain

I’ve been mistreated way too much

Too much pain for me to handle

As he lays his hands on my waist

My cheeks

Makes his lips meet mine

Everything dissapears

Just like I wanted to

I see nothing but us

Feel nothing but us

Hear nothing but our heartbeats.

 

 

We’ve become as one

We’re as one

We’ll always be as one

Author's Note

Ignore Grammar Problems Please.
Honest Oppinion.

Reviews

[Amanda_Rose]

i think this poem is beautiful

"We’ve become as one
We’re as one
We’ll always be as one"

it sent cchills down my spine. i also like how the text is centered as to allude to angel's wings themselves. idk if it was on purpose but it certainly adds to the appeal.

[Rose Masen]

It was written beautifully.

[Patient Poet (Yos)]

That was simply beautiful :)