Tatoos.

I'm trying out with some Happy poems.

As I’m looking at my arm

Regretting what I did

My angel covers them

And calls them tatoos

Tatoos for life

 

His eyes shines in the light of the sun

His smile just as perfect as every angel

No his is way more perfect

My perfect angel

Like he’s a statue

A statue of an angel

 

His hands

So soft against my cold skin

His whisper in my ear
”It’s gonna be okay”

Melts me

His voice

Oh yes so calming!

 

 

His voice is like music

A very well written piece of a symphony!

damn I want you as my angel forever!

 

 

Author's Note

Ignore Grammar Problems Please.
Honest Oppinion.
I'm trying out some new writing stuff, please bear over with me.

Reviews

[Arabdha]

you angel sounds really amazing..pretty well written..definitely one of your best..thanks for sharing :)

[Steph's_romantic_myster..]

This is superb, A Goth-like Romance Poem, Intriguing and fitting.... Such a wonderful write (and I know what the tatoos are ;-) ) A favorite for my box... Leme see you write more like this... Awsome, real awsome!!!!!!!

[Chelsea]

Very wonderful write. I like this new style of yours---- A bit depressing but also filled with light. You should continue on trying this, it worked really well. I think it showed off your talent!
I love how you wrote about angels. I never have grasped the concept--- But I like how you portrayed it!

[kyrie]

Angels are what get humans through life, I think. Without angels, we would so truly be damned. You picture this here. And even when we might not have an Angel forever, that one moment with the Angels are sometimes our saving grace for the rest of our lives. Beautifully written.