A collab with Stephen Reed.

A Collab Stephen Reed and I did.

the stars in the sky seem dimmer

No sleep within my eyes

Wishing for you in my life

But knowing we can't survive

 

We can not survive
The clear stars fade
My life passes by
And the idea of survival become less and less

 

 

My heart breaks so much looking into your eyes
My heart and my soul are a void
I wish I could hold you but just like the stars
Your forever out of my reach

 

 

Even if I try I wont be able,

Able to reach for the stars

They’re too far away just like you are

So far, but yet so damn close

 

 

Forever my heart will reach out for you
Forever I will live with the pain
For not having you is not having my life
In emptiness I will ever stay

 

 

A life I have

A life without you

Is a life without a need of living

God damn I'm in so much need of living

I am in need of living with you

 

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Chelsea]

This is an excellent collaboration you two. The flow and everything goes so well together!
A suggestion--- maybe switch some words up in the stanzas, they kind of are similar. Give each stanza a bit of punch!
I was kind of sad though how it didn't end on a happy note. It carried the depressing message throughout, I wish you'd tied in some light there! But anyways, it was a great read!

I love how you used stars in here!