Sooner Or Later.

Coldness

Rage

Sadness

Whatever it’s taking over

Release me.

 

 

My life is hollow

My body as well

My heart is shattered like a broken mirror.

 

 

My life is nothing

My faith is hollow

I am nothing.

 

 

I’m nothing to you

I thought I meant something to you

now I know it was a f*****g lie

A lie I enjoyed...

 

 

Here I am

At the bottom of a hole

A deep dark hole

Where I can’t find out.

 

I’m gone sooner or later

Hell I wish nobody would miss me

My life is hollow

What should I live for?

 

Slice my heart out.

slit my wrist

cut my throat.

Author's Note

Ignore Grammar Problems Please.
Honest Oppinion.

Reviews

[therisa]

The pain screams out from the monitor's screen, of a young girl's "will to live" shatter upon the rocks of life. Am hoping, this is, a releasing of old wounds and not fresh by you. It is a scary place, when you reach this point in your life, how your friends are there to listen to your cries for help.

[Cynthia]

I can feel the pain and the anger, it is so relateble!
I wish you are feeling well, is this real?
If so, I hope you will feel better in no time!
Its a amazing piece of write.
Great Job!

[Steph's_romantic_myster..]

Anger resentment and regret for living... Excellent piece you have named them all well.

[*skittlez*]

like it

[Arabdha]

resignation to life..despair..hopelessness..disgust..are all wrapped up in this one little poem..i like it !!

[Apathy To Empathy]

I have poem called "Tighten the rope" n all its about is hanging myself...Yeah...Really, your poems make me wonder that I really am not alone. Slicing my chest thighs and heart to let the chosts out is all I can do but now I know there is you too. :) (Please don't take that offensively) But i struggle too, and I'm glad to know I have someone to relate to, and I am very pleased to know that I will never be on my own...I'm always here if you ever need me...

[kyrie]

You've portrayed the resgnation that comes in the course of pain and grief. I wish you well, and that you never take your own life; the topics you speak of are those that need to be heard and said, and you are the one to say it with heart and honesty. Never let your voice die.