Losing Control.

I can feel it inside

it's right beneath the skin

I keep a cage

yet I can't hold it

it's breaking free.

 

 

The monster is breaking free

it's eating me up

tearing me apart from within

this creature isn't what I'm used to.

 

 

His cold dead eyes

glows in the dark

the contrast is perfect

the red eyes

lights up in the dark

oh how I love it.

 

 

The monster waits for the right moment

the right moment to break out

to take control

to make me freak out.

 

 

I have a f*****g cage

yet I can't hold it!
stay away from me

I can't control myself.

 

 

The rage is right beneath the skin. 

Author's Note

Ignore Grammar Problems Please.
Honest Oppinion.

Reviews

[Awkward]

I love your closing sentence! It gives me the feeling like its lurking and waiting to escape once again...
I can really relate to this, thanks for sharing.

[Sarusai Hiryu]

Being your own cage is the hardest thing in the world.
Nice write.

[Theodore]

i lose control every day its very hard to contain... good piece of writing keep it up...

[hannajade]

my honest opinion is that i love this poem! I'm gonna add it to my favourites:)

ugh, i feel that way alot. when someones doing their best to make me mad it is soo hard not to freak out :/

[Apathy To Empathy]

Rage is hard to deal with. I know because I am ALWAYS pissed, byt hey, life goes on and on and on and on....Okay. This chained cage, red glowing eyes illuminating through the dark, and the scratching beneath the skin really draws well ojn what it can be like. Great write, hun, great write!

[kyrie]

This is the message we always want to send to someone else when we can't explain ourselves. Stay away from me! There's a monster inside! But of course, most won't understand, or will choose not to. But there are those who will say: I know! I have a monster too! Let's make it out together. :)

[Steph's_romantic_myster..]

This is a great poem... The monster is inside all of us and is always trying to be realease. It is inside of all of us and their are a wide arrays of monsters, do did a great job catching your, putting it in the cage, and letting me stare at the lil f****r...... Good job!!!!!!

[Cynthia]

I can relate to how you feel,
I often feel this as well, it is really great.
Honest opinion is, it is amazing!
The details of this poem is truly interesting ,
and get readers attetion.

[Jim Parson]

I can feel it there. I won't piss you off!